I’m always open to feedback. We learn best by listening to others and thinking about their opinions.
In the beginning is based on the first chapter I have put together for my novel. The chapter is actually much longer, delves much more into world building, back story and character motivation.
The short snippets posts are a number of short stories related to my fantasy world. If you’re interested you can see the others on the page below.
I hope this helps please let me know if you have any more questions.
“The wind, in a loud baritone voice, demanded, ‘Today you die!’”
That’s one hell of a last line. I need to see where this goes. You’ve got me hooked.
Thanks for your kind words. Have a great evening.
Hello! Are you open to receiving honest feedback?
And is this the first chapter? I think so because it’s called in the beginning, but I just wanted to make sure.
Hi there!
I’m always open to feedback. We learn best by listening to others and thinking about their opinions.
In the beginning is based on the first chapter I have put together for my novel. The chapter is actually much longer, delves much more into world building, back story and character motivation.
The short snippets posts are a number of short stories related to my fantasy world. If you’re interested you can see the others on the page below.
I hope this helps please let me know if you have any more questions.
https://susanrader3.substack.com/t/short-snippet