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Wajad R. Basha's avatar

I like the concept of the story and the way you use a plain narrative in order to deliver it. The thirteen families and their magic are truly interesting. Maybe consider adding some conversations in the next scenes so it would be more engaging. But in general, really rich imagination here.☺️

AJ VALOR, Bedtime Stories's avatar

Love the cover!!

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