I like the concept of the story and the way you use a plain narrative in order to deliver it. The thirteen families and their magic are truly interesting. Maybe consider adding some conversations in the next scenes so it would be more engaging. But in general, really rich imagination here.☺️
thank you for your kind words. The thirteen families posts are really meant as information posts. Stories are short snippets. I’ll think about what your said though. . Have a great evening.
I like the concept of the story and the way you use a plain narrative in order to deliver it. The thirteen families and their magic are truly interesting. Maybe consider adding some conversations in the next scenes so it would be more engaging. But in general, really rich imagination here.☺️
Thank you. I appreciate the complement and advice.
thank you for your kind words. The thirteen families posts are really meant as information posts. Stories are short snippets. I’ll think about what your said though. . Have a great evening.
Love the cover!!